22A
– Elevator Pitch No. 3
2) A
reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
In
reading my reflections from elevator pitch one and two, I realized that the
thing that stood out to me the most was not my enthusiasm, or the way I spoke.
I noticed that one thing people commented on that I never even realized was my
motions and gestures. I often moved back and forth, almost swaying and moving
my hands too much. I found this made me look nervous, so I found the feedback
to be useful in making this new elevator pitch.
3) What did you change, based on
the feedback?
Based
on the feedback I received from my peers, I found that one thing I changed was
my motions and gestures. Being the third time I was doing the elevator pitch, I
found myself more comfortable and polished, and I believe this shows in the
third video.
Hey Drew great job on your pitch! I really like how you stand out in your surroundings, as well as that you look very formal. You did a great job with your motions and gestures, and your enthusiasm. I think that talking with your hands, to a certain extent, can be a great way to reiterate the thing that you're saying.
ReplyDeleteHi Drew! Another great elevator pitch. Great job taking the constructive criticisms and feedback from the other students and using it in this elevator pitch. I think your enthusiasm was there. This was your best pitch yet. Keep it coming!
ReplyDeleteHi, Drew! While I have a suspicion that this third elevator pitch is actually your second, I can't be too harsh since I didn't even attempt a third pitch myself! Ha ha! I think you're doing great in this course especially as a freshman. You keep up with the work and I can tell you're excited about your idea! Keep it up!
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